It doesn't matter how you pronounce it or anything as that's not what my comment was referring to. It's still spelled "Holo" in the anime as she writes her own name in cursive. Please don't try to sound cool when you're obviously not. Funny.
The Japanese "R" sounds a bit different than the english "R", the sound is something between the english L and the english R, so it's transcribed sometimes as L and sometimes as R. The first fansubs transcribed it as "Horo" I think, while the official english version that was released later used "Holo".
Well, my opinion is completely different from the DD description. XD I don't see the fantastic light and atmosphere anywhere, but I like this work for other reasons. It's fascinating how it combines realism and anime style. The fruits look like a classic still life, and the realism slowly gives way as your eyes wander to the center, until it's completely lost in her eyes, of course. The lighting on her skin has the tones of a realistic painting, but the softness of an anime drawing. It's a really interesting twist.
I am very impressed by your work on her breasts. Often, artists not only use incorrect proportions, but don't seem to realize that breasts are soft and not fully symmetrical, and that they can lay at odd angles. The way that you have hers, the right breast brushing against her arm and the left breast with the nipple higher up due to the musculature underneath with her arm raised in that manner shows you have a real understanding of the way that the female body moves and flexes.